It
is nearly midnight, November 30th, 2011. I am at home wrapped in a
blanket my mother made, huddled at my laptop, circa 2005, and I’m
writing a novel. I am almost finished really. Though the room is dark,
and my husband and children went to bed hours ago, I am not alone. I am
writing in a Google Doc and that doc is shared with my students, many of
whom are up way past their bedtimes because they too are finishing
their novels. Or, in several cases, they are already finished and they
are here to encourage or harass me as I write my last few thousand
words.
A
few days ago I swallowed hard and shared my novel with them as viewers.
They can not edit or even comment on it, but they can read it and if I
am working on it at the same time they can join me in a chat window on
the right hand side of my screen.
Trisha showed up first, “How’s it going Mrs. Roberts?”
I
paused mid-sentence to reply, and then in desperation, I typed to her,
“What would you do for revenge if your little brother sent text messages
to your boyfriend pretending to be you?”
This
was a serious plot question and, as we discussed possible scenarios,
Able opened the document. “Mrs. Roberts, you’re still not done? How many
words do you have left?”
I told him and he made the chat equivalent of hysterical laughter, “hahahahahahahah”
Something I might remember when I calculate his citizenship grade next week.
Eventually
they had to go and I went back to writing. I had a novel to finish,
but I was also desperately concerned about several students who were
very close to finishing, but had not opened their documents that
evening. Because they are all shared with me in Google Docs I can tell
when they work on their novels. I kept checking my Docs list to see if
they were editing yet. One by one each of them did arrive. I would chat
with them briefly and then let them work, coming back every now and then
to check their word count. In another tab I had the NaNoWriMo progress
page open and I frequently refreshed to see who had won.
Chance
stopped by. He had won several days before. He likewise wanted to know
how many words I had left to write. Then, in an effort to be more funny
than helpful, he started to tell me exactly how many minutes I had left,
“Just two hours and three minutes left. Now two hours and two minutes
left.” I ignored him and kept writing.
Julie
opened the document, but did not engage in the chat for a while. She
was reading. Her first chat message was to tell me how much she liked
the first chapter. She was just in time. I was trying to remember if I
had ever mentioned my protagonist’s last name. Julie found it in chapter
four and let me know. As she read through the novel from the
beginning, I raced to finish the end.
Leo
was one who logged on late, but he only had a few hundred words to go. I
greeted him and let him work, but a few minutes later he opened my
document. “I NEED HELP!” he was desperate enough to use all caps for
that.
He
was having a small technical problem logging into the NaNoWriMo site. I
looked up the username and password he had shared with me in a Google
form at the beginning of the month and logged in as him. I had no
problem. I pasted his novel into the word count verifier from his Google
doc and told him he was 97% done. After I logged out he was able to log
in himself again and eventually finished just fine, writing over 8,000
words. As with most students, this was the longest writing he had ever
done.
As
I was writing the last climactic moment of my novel, Troy opened the
document and began reading. “Hi Mrs. Roberts. In the first chapter there
is a place where you have a b but it should say be.”
“Thanks Troy. We will work on editing next week.”
“Are you almost done?”
“Yes.”
“Do you want me to leave you alone so you can keep writing?”
“Sure.”
“You sound like you are in a bad mood? Why didn’t you finish yesterday? Did you procrastinate?”
I
took a deep breath and suggested that it was late and Troy should get
some sleep. Three hundred words later my story was told, all parts
accounted for, plot appropriately twisted, characters appropriately
dealt with and loopholes casually left open for the sequel. I verified
my word count and went to check on students still working.
Noel
was still writing at 11:30 pm. She had won several days ago, meeting
her lofty 30,000 word goal already, but she was still writing more. I
suggested she could go to bed.
I
left Donna still writing, less than a hundred words short, and destined
to finish in time. She would be the last to finish, but she would
finish.
I put myself to bed.
After
a month of NaNoWriMo my novel is done. My students novels are done, but
there is a new habit I can’t shake and so, I must add, this blog post is
923 words long. And that is really the end.
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